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Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« on: August 15, 2012, 08:35:57 pm »
Story: The Misterious mailman
Chapter 1: The Search

Thomas while talking on Phone with his friend DareN :why is every one is trying to kill one another?
Thomas: i was searching him in his room.as i was searching, i heard a sound,i knew that there was no body here execpt me.there was no place left for some one to hide as i have searched everywhere. What was it?.i was more like a sneeze of a male.firstly i was freaked out.it came under the bed.with my ccourage.i took a furry sneek under the bed. BULLSHIT...it was Baldachyn..he was cryingg like a little child girl and screeming like a retard when i saw him.Well who gona know? I picked my gun out of jacket and aimed at aim.Suddenly he bit my toe.OUCH Fuck u..i said.With the poisoniuous teeths venom .my gun sliped off from my hands.And fell on my  foot.Son of a gun...it hurts.i was going to pick it up.but suddenly baldachyn picked it before me..and aimed at me .it was Rifle.i was shocked. I couldn't move else he will shoot me.but instead of shooting..


« Last Edit: August 16, 2012, 07:18:24 am by Thomas »

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2012, 09:06:18 pm »
Chapter2: The Street.

Instead of shooting me. He jumped out from his room window and kinda broke his leg.and ran off like a retard. I ran downstairs to the street.It was almost midnight. The Full moon was shinning on.it was winter .the street was covered in fog and mist.the street was dark and almost 20 meter long and narrow. It was likw balconey of apartments.there was one street lamp.as i was walking and countinued for search of baldachyn.the moon got covered with clouds .it became creepy. There was no sign of baldachyn..as i started to walk in relax mode slowly.suddenly.i heard a duzz sound like a steel is hit.it came from green garbage trunk.firstlyi thought it would be mice jumping off on trunk.because i saw them in baldachyn house kicthen.as i came closer to that trunk.i saw light coming out from it like xerox machine.i was freaked out.i caught my breath.i took a deep relax breath and with my courage i opened the trunk slid. Disgusting...eww pff gross smell. It was like 20 days raw old fish decompsing  in your oven.OMFG it was baldachyn talking to girl friend for help...i took ouy my pistol out of my pocket and aimed at him. While saying Don't Move or i will shoot.i noticed that baldachyn had baby used diaper as hat on his head. Some brown shit was still dipping off from diaper,

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2012, 09:20:50 pm »
Chapter 3: The Ladder.

Brown shit was still dipping off.Suddenly he stoodup and jumped over me and climed a ladder like a monkey.the ladder was near to him.he climed to some ones window and went in room was dark and lights were switched off.as he entered the room .i think with his terrible smell people in that roon woke up.the lights went on.as i was on street watching all this. I heard three different screems.1st ones was the guy's wife. 2nd ones was guy's. 3rd ones was a little girl screem it was so loud and horrible that my ears went numb a glass window near me broke.What the heck?. It was baldachyn's.i turned around and started to look at the shadows of the room.they were al fighting..the fight goes on for atleast 30 seconds.then it became quiet. So quiet..that even i could hear wind blow. After 10 seconds i started to see some movements going on. suddenly someone pushed baldachyn out of room from window. He fell off in front of me facing me saying oh crap i missed the ladder 1st step as i always did in child hood.

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2012, 09:39:28 pm »
Chapter 4: Misunderstanding..

facing towards me.i saw his eyes he look terrified. As i was now. I asked him
Thomas: what the hell are you baldachyn?
Baldachyn: -while making a troll face saying- i am a zombie alien.. Run run run
Thomas: orly? It means you won't feel pain if i stabb you in nutz.
Baldachyn:nononono.. Just kidding btw why are you trying to kill me after all.what i did wrong please forgive me.
By saying this baldachyn stood up .
Thomas: i am not trying to kill you. I just wanted to give you these letters and packages.you were running away from me like retard on loose.
Baldachyn:then why these guns? You were aiming at me?
Thomas:guns are the packages.the toys you ordered for your niece.
Baldachyn:oh...bullshit.then why you were aiming at me?
Thomas:to stop you from running away from me like a retard. Here is your stuff. Now get out from here
Baldchyn:ok ba ba ba..i run like boozers la lalalal..
Thomas:noooooooo.
Duzz ,thus balda had an acident with banana. 
Baldachyn: aw shit! again!
The End..

I wrote all story in WLAN Nokia e61i , if there will be spells mistake kindly forgive me ..
« Last Edit: August 16, 2012, 07:22:17 am by Thomas »

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 10:07:42 pm »
Epic.

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2012, 10:37:47 pm »
I want the same weed this guy is smoking..


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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2012, 10:42:58 pm »
Son of Shakspeare  :) :)

Nice man  :)


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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #7 on: August 15, 2012, 11:10:00 pm »
Col story bro :P.

I was just joking ,seems to be a lovely story, nice anyway  .
« Last Edit: August 15, 2012, 11:54:24 pm by N.H.ans »

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« Reply #8 on: August 16, 2012, 12:18:14 am »

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #10 on: August 16, 2012, 03:29:10 am »
lol nice story but it'd be cool if you involved more characters in the story! ;p

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #11 on: August 16, 2012, 04:55:43 am »
make a book already!  ???

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #12 on: August 16, 2012, 06:27:45 am »
ADD A Devil in your Story who catch you and Cut your body into little little piece and after dat he will gave your body to his dogs xDDDDD.

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #13 on: August 16, 2012, 06:52:48 am »
Cool story!  :o Give it to Baldachyn.

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Re: Thomas Adventures (Stories of Life)
« Reply #14 on: August 16, 2012, 07:17:20 am »
Its Funny Story guys..

The Character Baldachyn is not [DnA]Baldachyn
I used 2 Characters as main. Like Sherlock Holmes.
I am Thomas which have this kinda experience.
This is story is just to show my Story writing skills , only i have story/Drama writing skills in my whole family :)
'Race Escape' Coming Soon! stay tuned.